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    dots Submission Name: Whispersdots
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    Author: Briannan
    ASL Info:    20/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.59 - 123/127/49
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsWhispersdots
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    You speak to me,
    In the ancient language.
    The one that lovers,
    Still use today.

    Moans, and cries,
    Soft and repetitive.
    A secret language,
    That all understand.

    The language of soft laughter,
    voices down the hall,
    whispers in your ear,
    The language we share.

    You are my secret.
    And no one will know,
    The words between us,
    As passion grows.




    Submitted on 2009-12-17 01:34:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Extremely well done penning here, everything is beautiful understated--less is always more in poetry--and so very romantical!!! michael
    | Posted on 2010-10-11 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      sweet. the throes of passion engulf even the most puritan of souls and it seems that its flames have licked at your feet and you fell into the fire.
    | Posted on 2009-12-18 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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