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    dots Submission Name: A glimpsedots

    Author: Briannan
    ASL Info:    20/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.59 - 123/127/49
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsA glimpsedots

    A Slow motion reel
    Snap shots
    A flash of flesh
    A glimpse of breast
    A sigh
    A moan
    Give and take
    Hair flying back
    Nails against
    Your chest
    I look in your eyes
    Throw my head back
    Fall forward into
    Your chest
    Then the thought
    And I am left
    And unsatisfied
    My mind
    Showing just enough
    To make sure
    I know
    Who owns my body
    Who makes it hungry
    And how the passion
    Burning through my veins
    Turning my blood
    To smoke
    Just enough to
    Make me wild

    Submitted on 2009-12-17 01:43:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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