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    dots Submission Name: A glimpsedots
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    Author: Briannan
    ASL Info:    20/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.59 - 123/127/49
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 534
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 722



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    dotsA glimpsedots
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    A Slow motion reel
    Snap shots
    A flash of flesh
    A glimpse of breast
    A sigh
    A moan
    Rolling
    Give and take
    Hair flying back
    Nails against
    Your chest
    I look in your eyes
    Throw my head back
    Fall forward into
    Your chest
    Then the thought
    Stops
    And I am left
    Alone
    And unsatisfied
    My mind
    Showing just enough
    To make sure
    I know
    Who owns my body
    Who makes it hungry
    And how the passion
    Feels
    Burning through my veins
    Turning my blood
    To smoke
    Just enough to
    Make me wild
    Just
    A
    Glimpse




    Submitted on 2009-12-17 01:43:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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