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    dots Submission Name: Confessional Boothdots
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    Author: Briannan
    ASL Info:    20/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.59 - 123/127/49
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsConfessional Boothdots
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    You are my priest
    I tell you
    All the Darkness
    Living in my heart
    You dole out
    My Absolution
    My Penance
    I can't help but wonder
    Where secrets
    And sins go
    When whispered
    To the moon
    For the priest will not
    Have me
    I am not of the faith
    I wonder
    If there is a God
    Does he/she
    Take confession that
    Isn't indoctrinated to take
    Are the confessions to
    A lover
    Lawyer
    Brother
    Taken
    Just as well
    As the confessions
    To a Father?
    I think I am penitent
    Enough to forgive
    But for some
    I don't mourn myself
    Enough
    To
    Be
    Sorry




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