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    dots Submission Name: Delusionaldots
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    Author: Urisen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Netherlands
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 27/34/32
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       Some more random musings.


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    Have you ever seen yellow dragons
    climbing up your curtains?
    For I am certain,
    I had no curtains
    to start out with?

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    Submitted on 2009-12-17 14:54:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Never the yellow dragons... but I'm either seeing things that are not there.. or.. I'm not there seeing things. Only "I" understand what I just said.... but me and myself are still confused.
    See what your random thought did to me?
    | Posted on 2010-01-07 00:00:00 | by kre8ive1 | [ Reply to This ]
      There are too many things I think I have seen. At some point I just quit worrying whether or not they really are there

    (this honestly made me smile -- little reminder that poetry can be simple, lets not make too much of it all the time)
    | Posted on 2009-12-17 00:00:00 | by Lady of Shalott | [ Reply to This ]
      (smile).

    i had a pink elephant in my living room once.

    seriously.

    | Posted on 2009-12-17 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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