Delusional by Urisen

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Submission Name: Delusional dots

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Author:	Urisen
ASL Info:	25/M/Netherlands
Elite Ratio:	4.95 - 27/34/32
Words:	29

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
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Description:
Some more random musings.

Delusional dots

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Have you ever seen yellow dragons
climbing up your curtains?
For I am certain,
I had no curtains
to start out with?

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Submitted on 2009-12-17 14:54:36 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Never the yellow dragons... but I'm either seeing things that are not there.. or.. I'm not there seeing things. Only "I" understand what I just said.... but me and myself are still confused.
See what your random thought did to me?
| Posted on 2010-01-07 00:00:00 | by kre8ive1 | [ Reply to This ]
  There are too many things I think I have seen. At some point I just quit worrying whether or not they really are there

(this honestly made me smile -- little reminder that poetry can be simple, lets not make too much of it all the time)
| Posted on 2009-12-17 00:00:00 | by Lady of Shalott | [ Reply to This ]
  (smile).

i had a pink elephant in my living room once.

seriously.

| Posted on 2009-12-17 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.