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    dots Submission Name: Doubt...dots

    Author: LaxGoalie
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 6/4/8
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Is it so hard for you to understand that I am already trying my best at everything. You make me doubt my decisions at every turn with your questions. “How”, “why”, “are you sure you want this” is all I hear. I cannot take it anymore. If I didn’t have such high respect for you, not to mention love, I would be long gone. Now I just sit there and take all the crap you throw at me. This cannot continue. Every time I dig myself out of another hole, you are the one that throws me back into a deeper one. How am I ever supposed to follow your advice, when every single shred turns out to be destructive for me. I will not tell you that I’m suicidal because I dont want to hurt you…

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