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    dots Submission Name: wonderlanddots
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    Author: blu_kittin
    ASL Info:    20/F/Garden of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    6.15 - 711/397/207
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 629
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 225



    Description:
       haha yeah its all pretty much about narcisim
    but none of us would post anything if we didn't all have a touch of that bug, now would we


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotswonderlanddots
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    my body is a wonderland
    of ridges and swells
    and crevices that fill with sand
    warmed by the summer sun
    i explore it with my finger fanned
    tracing the valleys
    dipping into no mans land




    Submitted on 2009-12-18 01:11:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wonderland indeed! This is spicy, lusty, and just downright delicious!!
    | Posted on 2011-02-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm... are you sure this is about narcissism?
    my mind takes me down a different path...
    | Posted on 2009-12-19 00:00:00 | by DestroyOhBoy | [ Reply to This ]


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