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    dots Submission Name: Bittersweet Miserydots
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    Author: Eyamma
    ASL Info:    16/Sry, I'm taken/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 22/21/77
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 841
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    dotsBittersweet Miserydots
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    "In my hallucination
    I saw my beloved's flower garden
    In my vertigo, in my dizziness
    In my drunken haze
    Whirling and dancing like a spinning wheel

    I saw myself as the source of existence
    I was there in the beginning
    And I was the spirit of love
    Now I am sober
    There is only the hangover
    And the memory of love
    And only the sorrow

    I yearn for happiness
    I ask for help
    I want mercy
    And my love says:

    Look at me and hear me
    Because I am here
    Just for that

    I am your moon and your moonlight too
    I am your flower garden and your water too
    I have come all this way, eager for you
    Without shoes or shawl

    I want you to laugh
    To kill all your worries
    To love you
    To nourish you

    Oh sweet bitterness
    I will soothe you and heal you
    I will bring you roses
    I, too, have been covered with thorns"
    -Madonna, Bittersweet




    Submitted on 2009-12-18 01:49:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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