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    dots Submission Name: you said we are okaydots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 921
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 461



    Description:
       I had a little moment where I was unsure of something but he cleared it up. this is about how you sometimes need reasurance.


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    dotsyou said we are okaydots
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    you said we are okay
    that we are better than that.
    you said you loved me more
    and you weren't ready to turn back.

    I said I love you too.
    you told me to dry my eyes
    we were meant to be together
    and that's all we were going to try.

    I'm sorry for freaking out
    you always know what to say
    you said that you love me
    and you said that we're okay.




    Submitted on 2009-12-18 11:33:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree with the other comment, this a a very touching poem. Have you shown it to Case yet? I loved the line structure and the rhyme scheme. It was very graceful.

    ~Dreamer
    | Posted on 2010-01-06 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]
      That is a warm touching poem. Graceful so so graceful!!
    Great Job!
    | Posted on 2009-12-18 00:00:00 | by 13thprotector | [ Reply to This ]


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