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Submission Name: you said we are okay dots

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Author:	PopRocksRae
ASL Info:	21/ F/ Heaven
Elite Ratio:	2.49 - 232/369/355
Words:	77

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	921
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	461

Description:
I had a little moment where I was unsure of something but he cleared it up. this is about how you sometimes need reasurance.

you said we are okay dots

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you said we are okay
that we are better than that.
you said you loved me more
and you weren't ready to turn back.

I said I love you too.
you told me to dry my eyes
we were meant to be together
and that's all we were going to try.

I'm sorry for freaking out
you always know what to say
you said that you love me
and you said that we're okay.

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I agree with the other comment, this a a very touching poem. Have you shown it to Case yet? I loved the line structure and the rhyme scheme. It was very graceful.

~Dreamer
| Posted on 2010-01-06 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]
That is a warm touching poem. Graceful so so graceful!!
Great Job!
| Posted on 2009-12-18 00:00:00 | by 13thprotector | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.