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    dots Submission Name: She's Not Who He Thinks She Isdots
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    Author: just an angel
    ASL Info:    17/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 95/109/59
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 663
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1051



    Description:
       Thought it was interesting to come up with while going to sleep and actually remembering it the next morning


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    dotsShe's Not Who He Thinks She Isdots
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    He's in love with the stranger
    Who isn't so rare
    He's in love with the stranger
    Who can be found anywhere

    He's in love with the whore
    Who gives no second thought
    He's in love with the whore
    Who is easily bought

    He's in love with the bitch
    Who always has her demands
    He's in love with the bitch
    Who no one can stand

    He's in love with the fool
    Who constantly trips
    He's in love with the fool
    Who lets good things slip

    He's in love with the girl
    Who never gives complience
    He's in love with the girl
    Who stares in silence

    He thinks he loves a woman
    Who has mgiht and pride
    He thinks he loves a woman
    Who has nothing to hide

    He's in love with this person
    A girl, fool, bitch, whore, stranger
    He's in love with this person
    Whose knight needs to save her




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