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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts at The Speed of Lightdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThoughts at The Speed of Lightdots
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    One tenth of a second
    On the feed back loop
    The oscillation
    For translation

    You

    The event horizon
    The differentiation
    Between the octaves
    Of creation

    The power of your mind
    Is what you can define
    The world that you see
    Or a world that could be

    The positive and negativity
    Law of duality
    Needs the focal point
    Of your indivi-duality

    In your heart and mind
    The equilibrium of the singularity

    Expansion and contraction to finite and infinity
    With thoughts at the speed of light
    With-in and with-outside
    Witness eternity

    And the pulse flows ever continual in momentum
    The fluidity of light reassembles
    In its open field
    And now it is the expressions in your heart
    With its emotional grasp
    That understands the love
    While everything folds inside
    And explodes out from your eyes

    Now you understand the centre
    And the seat of consciousness
    Now you see the world
    You see it there defined
    In all of its beauty
    Recognition of your mind
    Sent straight out from your heart
    With thoughts at the speed of light









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