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    dots Submission Name: Pay It All No Heeddots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPay It All No Heeddots
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    Traps

    Crisis
    Global warming
    Economic collapse
    World disaster
    new world order
    Conflict and destruction
    Death and disorder

    Pay them all no heed

    Traps

    They occupy your mind
    All of them designed
    To keep you
    In your slavery

    While you have no other time
    In the focus of your mind
    While you have this fear and doubt
    Nestling in your heart
    You live out the edicts of indoctrinated
    You see no other explanation
    You cannot see how you are being used
    To generate
    Such a sick and tiny world

    So if you want to help in the change
    If you want to rearrange
    This bondage into liberty
    And if you think you wonít survive
    The universe always provides
    Itís just that you gave the authority
    To the people
    Controlling your heart and mind

    So
    Pay them all no heed
    Crisis
    Global warming
    Economic collapse
    World disaster
    new world order
    Conflict and destruction
    Death and disorder

    These are the fear and doubt
    Keeping you from being free
    Traps, constructed for your slavery
    Built by controlling you with money

    Do not fear to die
    Do not be surprised
    Your fear of death
    Is your greatest enemy

    Death, money, enemy

    Pay it all no heed
    Live as you were meant to be
    Knowing constantly
    That God; will provide

    Why and when did you agree
    To buy and sell
    What is yours by right

    Gya










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      Itís just that you gave the authority
    To the people
    Controlling your heart and mind


    WOW speaks volumes to me not that other parts didnt but it stuck out for me once again great post I hate to keep commenting on your work I feel like all I'm doing is complenting you but really thats all I can do its perfect

    Jackz
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