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    dots Submission Name: "This is what is meant?"dots
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    Author: Sirendarkheart
    ASL Info:    16/F/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/1
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 539
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 499



    Description:
       A peom about break-ups and how they dont work for us all.


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    dots"This is what is meant?"dots
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    I pause and look around.
    Sunlights too bright,
    Moonlight, I see nothing right.
    Its hard to stay sane when evrything is showing me that I may actually be crazy.
    You said that taking a break may help me,
    But you seen the truth didn't you?
    You knew it wouldn't help,
    but you didnt see that I wouldn't come back to you
    Now do you see that even though I love you this is what was meant to be?
    I'll see you in my dreams.




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