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    dots Submission Name: Consensus of Observationdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsConsensus of Observationdots
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    As we diverge from the centre
    To spread our individuality
    From its fountain outward
    And into the separated resolution
    Of experience
    And its radiation

    Still
    We are linked
    By division
    To the original consensus
    Of perfection
    In common agreement
    Of origination

    And so………
    Individuality
    Is of prime importance to universal conception
    Its potency of observation
    Carries the eternal mind
    In a stillness and tranquil silence of focus

    And so……..
    On what
    And how
    Do you focus ?¿

    Is a question a person must ask
    Most seriously of themselves

    So if you turn yourself to fear and sacrifice
    Then all you will see is fear and sacrifice
    And by resonant vibration create
    What you see

    And so………
    If you turn your focus to love and liberty
    You will see reality
    And create by resonation
    What you see

    The consensus of observation
    Agrees
    And therefore you create your world
    Either in fear
    Or in love

    And so……..
    On what
    And how
    Do you focus ?¿

    Is a question a person must ask
    Most seriously of themselves









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      Dam.... you really have talent! This is yet another great post from you!!!! I may have to begin stalking you I hope you don't mind :-D this is amazing your ablitiy to find the right words to have them fit so well with one another and flow so smoothy it impresses me each and everytime i love the topic of this post its great!!!

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