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    dots Submission Name: Gyadots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    She is Goddess
    Mother
    Womb and cradle

    Initiation and deliverance

    A myriad beauty of form

    A sensual black Madonna
    With the light of all life in her eyes
    Vibrant electric

    Gentle in her deep and luxurious colour
    Such a smile upon her lips
    Such ancient wisdom lingers

    She is Gya
    And I have beheld her unleashing
    Her moment of freedom

    See her
    As she resides in the vast and intricate
    Upon sea and land
    Through every construction of herself
    She walks

    Gya

    Sacred heart
    Her temple of Earth

    Gya

    My love
    My Queen
    As I knelt

    She is Goddess
    Mother
    Womb and cradle

    Initiation and deliverance

    A myriad beauty of form

    A sensual black Madonna
    With the light of all life in her eyes





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