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    dots Submission Name: one step to the darkdots
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    Author: austin
    ASL Info:    22/ Male/ Odessa, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    4.41 - 376/396/84
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 654
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 929



    Description:
       song lyrics, how life gets you down but you gotta keep trying, no matter how bleak things get


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    take the chance, become the fate
    feel it course through you
    embrace it through, becoming new
    the truth is found within you

    take one step, one step to the dark
    all these fragments fly around
    so take one step, one step to the dark
    where the lights not likely found

    feel your way, through the maze
    your beating heart misguides you
    getting thin, and lost within
    no honest way, to pull through

    if those wings turn to ash
    and the ashes let you fall
    its all inside, hope to find
    the only way to scale the wall

    take one step, one step in the dark
    where the fragments all shatter round
    take one step, one step in the dark
    where the lights not likely found

    take a step in the dark...
    take a step in the dark...
    take a step in the dark...




    Submitted on 2009-12-21 01:28:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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