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    dots Submission Name: Truly Gonedots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 680
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Wrote this for Brittany Murphy but sorta changed it to reflect everyone who lost someone...


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    dotsTruly Gonedots
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    A piece of us die with the ones we lost
    A expectation no one could foresee
    And we try not to think of it at any cost
    But itís part of our reality

    Like a star in the sky one of our own faded
    One that we cherish, adored and loved
    A diamond, a rare stone, gift only God created
    Are no longer with us

    We must not be saddened by their passing
    For they had brought us so much joy
    So many memories for our taking
    For the world to enjoy

    It is hard not to be sad when you lost someone dear
    But know that they are truly in a better place welcomed with open arms
    And though they are not here
    They are neither truly goneÖ

    For Brittany Murphy & Those Who Lost Someone R.I.P. Miss You Already...




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