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    dots Submission Name: Somebody Told Medots
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    Author: XxSkyelerxX
    ASL Info:    12/Female/Varies
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 11/27/16
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 976
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 1041



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    dotsSomebody Told Medots
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    Somebody told me that you were in love.
    I asked who, and they said,
    She's in love with you.


    I left you a message that night, on the phone.
    You never called back.
    I guess no one was home.


    You weren't at school the next day,
    So I called again.
    It rang shrill in my ear,
    until the end.


    I left a message once more,
    Why didn't you answer, whore?
    A chuckle, a laugh.
    I hung up.


    I called you again, later that day.
    Someone answered, God!
    My breath went away.


    Hello? A voice. Not yours, your mums.
    Sounded cracked, faded, then silent,
    Listening to the phone's hum.


    I said your name, I asked for you
    A pierce cry in my ears,
    Then she told me the truth.


    You died on that day, that I called your phone,
    A gun to your lips,
    When no one was home.




    Submitted on 2009-12-21 14:58:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Keep going, girl ^_^ *shakes her hands* woot woot :o
    | Posted on 2009-12-21 00:00:00 | by MorningHell | [ Reply to This ]
      Heeee. I like this in a way. It flows wonderfully, but you can't really feel the emotion in it unless you have a high sensitivity to any of the drama floating around. It's still good though, y'know?
    Maybe I shall read moar latersss.
    | Posted on 2009-12-21 00:00:00 | by Tesana | [ Reply to This ]


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