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    dots Submission Name: My Cubdots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    19/F/On A Carousel
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 451/419/172
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1032
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 553



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    dotsMy Cubdots
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    Everything I had left,
    Every smile.
    And laugh.
    I gave it to my womb.
    Who crafted from the dough,
    My angel.
    I made so many promises,
    and Prayers to every God,
    Then at 19 inches she towered over me,
    and engulfed my heart.
    What she will become,
    lays in her DNA.
    And in every loving touch and kiss I give.
    With every hope I allow myself to have,
    I give myself away,
    Into her tiny hands.
    Ten fingers,
    Curled around my soul.





    Submitted on 2009-12-21 20:41:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      and with every curdled scream my heart wrenches with fear of her safety and happiness,love.
    | Posted on 2010-01-14 00:00:00 | by SAGITTREVEALED | [ Reply to This ]
      and so it begins...and she will dominate your every thought and breath from here on out. motherhood is the most beautiful experience of all.


    love and kisses,
    hugz n misses,
    Mummie
    | Posted on 2009-12-21 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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