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    dots Submission Name: Love Is Such A Bore.dots
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    Author: xAngeliquex
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 14/14/30
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 952
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       It doesn't have to make sense. Poetry doesn't, sometimes. >_>


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    dotsLove Is Such A Bore.dots
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    How boring when you kiss me,
    How boring it is when you resist me.
    It's so boring that we are in love,
    How about a little hate to mix it all up?
    I wouldn't mind some screaming, some yelling,
    Really ANYTHING opposed to this happy feeling.

    What's so wrong with being in love?
    Boring, how could you say such a thing?

    Love doesn't last forever,
    It never does.
    Could I take your hand and break it?
    No, please don't get me mistaken.
    I love you, with all my heart,
    Yet I would like to tear you apart.

    Something, anything opposed to this,
    Eternal bliss...
    Love is such a bore.




    Submitted on 2009-12-22 14:42:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked it, reminds me of what I just told my....friend. >.> Anyways, keep up the good work and submit more! I'll be waiting to see what you come up with! *hugs* Good luck.
    | Posted on 2009-12-22 00:00:00 | by alyssafrench16 | [ Reply to This ]


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