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Love Is Such A Bore.

Author: xAngeliquex
ASL Info:    15/Female/Texas
Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 14 /14 /30
Words: 112
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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It doesn't have to make sense. Poetry doesn't, sometimes. >_>

Love Is Such A Bore.

How boring when you kiss me,
How boring it is when you resist me.
It's so boring that we are in love,
How about a little hate to mix it all up?
I wouldn't mind some screaming, some yelling,
Really ANYTHING opposed to this happy feeling.

What's so wrong with being in love?
Boring, how could you say such a thing?

Love doesn't last forever,
It never does.
Could I take your hand and break it?
No, please don't get me mistaken.
I love you, with all my heart,
Yet I would like to tear you apart.

Something, anything opposed to this,
Eternal bliss...
Love is such a bore.

Submitted on 2009-12-22 14:42:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really liked it, reminds me of what I just told my....friend. >.> Anyways, keep up the good work and submit more! I'll be waiting to see what you come up with! *hugs* Good luck.
| Posted on 2009-12-22 00:00:00 | by alyssafrench16 | [ Reply to This ]

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