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    dots Submission Name: Friends Foreverdots
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    Author: AcidCOKE
    ASL Info:    229/HeShe/RainbowCity
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 3/4/5
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 822
    Average Vote:    4.3333
    Bytes: 911



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    dotsFriends Foreverdots
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    I don't think you know what you mean to me
    But you can mean a lot
    The chance of us not being friends
    Is a real long shot
    I hate when you're sad
    I love it when your happy
    Because when your upset
    It makes me feel crappy
    Thanks for always being there
    When I need it the most
    If it weren't for you the chance of me not being here
    Would really have come close
    i don't know what I would do
    If you weren't my friend
    I don't think my heart would ever mend
    I hope you know
    Just like you've had mine
    And it will always stay that way
    Until the end of time
    We'll be friends
    Hopefully without end
    So I just wanna say 'Thanks'
    Thanks for being my friend...
    ~~~~~dedicated to: Sandy




    Submitted on 2009-12-22 19:03:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That's really sweet of you.
    Thanks Sonia! :D That means a lot to me. X3
    -Gives you the most epic hug-
    | Posted on 2009-12-22 00:00:00 | by DiniBini | [ Reply to This ]


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