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    dots Submission Name: No way outdots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsNo way outdots
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    Lifes a bitch
    And then we die
    So fuck the world
    Let's get high
    But what happens
    When that high
    Doesn't help you escape
    The pain that you feel
    But only makes it worse
    My only escape left
    Would be to embrace death
    But what can I do
    To get that result
    Nothing to painful
    I could never
    Slice my wrist open
    And watch my blood
    Just drip away
    Popping pills are to slow
    I tried once
    Chickened out
    And told someone
    Couldn't jump off a bridge
    Or building
    To much anxiety
    Hell I get scared
    Waiting to ride a rollercoaster
    No one hates me enough
    To do it themselves
    I'm loved by everyone
    I could possiably
    Blow my brains out
    But I ain't got a job
    So I can't get a gun
    Plus that's a mess
    For who ever finds me
    And I don't want to hurt
    Anyone more then I am
    Already going to
    I could get into a car wreck
    But the probability of living
    Is still to high
    Looks like I'm just screwed
    Left to live a painful life
    For everyone to break my heart
    Why does life got to be so painful
    With no way out




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      all pains can be healed. with life becomes growth. and with growth comes wisdom. i have the wisdom of knowing that i have caused this kind of pain, not only to others, but to myself. and that is a lesson learned from life. as my quote says, forgivness is the abilty to overcome your fears.
    | Posted on 2010-01-09 00:00:00 | by thomasnkristen | [ Reply to This ]
      there is enough reason to get mad at the world but there is also a reason why somethings are respected,things like poetry which has served the world tirelessly and still lords over some other art form even in its oldage so to write poetry remember there is a serious regard to the choice of words because it them do the power of poetry reside.The feeling infered in this poem is real but the means of communication can contaminate the soul so at this i will call for a change and commend you trail to show what you feel but petry is more than what we feel
    | Posted on 2009-12-23 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]


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