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    dots Submission Name: Powerful Yet?dots
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    Author: Rubyheart
    ASL Info:    13/F/The closet.
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 6/7/14
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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       But yet- I have no desire to be powerful.


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    dotsPowerful Yet?dots
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    Day by day, I ask myself if I'm powerful.
    My response is never the same; for I'm weak.

    The question still lurks around me,
    Awaiting the one moment whenever I have an answer.

    Am I confused? Am I lost?
    My life is going to waste; but power is out of reach.

    Day by day, I ask myself if I'm powerful.
    But infact, I never ask others.

    Shows how wise I am.

    Power is always out of reach in this damn life I'm living...
    But still? I have no answer.




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      You are weak, that is your answer. In this life power is obtained by wealth, perhaps, but material power only stretches so far. Political power then? No, for that too is but riding a whim of humanity and opinion.
    Physical strength? Try measuring yourself to a truck, but mental strength, one you would like to believe towers above all else, will sometimes come out as nothing when reflected upon, when measured and tested, though realizing this weakness is the first step to becoming stronger.

    That is what I'd like to believe anyway.
    | Posted on 2010-01-25 00:00:00 | by Urisen | [ Reply to This ]


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