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    dots Submission Name: Calmodulindots
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    Author: Draumrkopa
    ASL Info:    23/F/buy da coffee shop
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 225/93/22
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1149
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 268



    Description:
       Tis a love poem obviously. For that man that I love. =P


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    dotsCalmodulindots
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    I fell asleep listening to your heart,
    Beat.
    And later when I woke,
    With you lying next to me,
    I looked at your face,
    Looking so peaceful in your sleep,
    And my heart swelled with the thought,
    That you are mine to keep.




    Submitted on 2009-12-24 08:52:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      a nice little poem of two together...
    nice-_-
    | Posted on 2009-12-29 00:00:00 | by 13thprotector | [ Reply to This ]
      Not bad... not bad...
    | Posted on 2009-12-28 00:00:00 | by laffeytaffey | [ Reply to This ]


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