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    dots Submission Name: Quiet silencedots
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    Author: Urisen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Netherlands
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 27/34/32
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsQuiet silencedots
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    ________________

    Hush,
    be silent,
    can you not see
    he is turning mad
    in a random fashion?

    To speak
    would be to disturb it.
    _________________




    Submitted on 2009-12-24 12:24:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this, it's enough and then some.
    you get the picture of someones dark and otherworldly ...
    | Posted on 2009-12-25 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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