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Submission Name: Quiet silence dots

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Author:	Urisen
ASL Info:	25/M/Netherlands
Elite Ratio:	4.95 - 27/34/32
Words:	29

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Quiet silence dots

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Hush,
be silent,
can you not see
he is turning mad
in a random fashion?

To speak
would be to disturb it.
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i like this, it's enough and then some.
you get the picture of someones dark and otherworldly ...
| Posted on 2009-12-25 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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