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    dots Submission Name: Wretched am Idots

    Author: Tesana
    ASL Info:    16/F/Frozen Wasteland
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 5/4/3
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsWretched am Idots

    False hope is but a comfort
    A fluffy pillow of lies
    This is what I allow myself to succumb to
    Because I see no other answer.

    I'm once again unsure of where I stay
    Unsure of what to do
    A choice of pain must be made
    Yet neither side is truely pleasant

    Both sides of the road make me smile only slightly
    As both have their good moments and days
    Yet one is broken, in need of help
    And the other is torn between two in the same.

    My determination makes me scream inside my head
    "I can fix this, I can."
    But deep within the recesses of my mind
    I know I can't.

    That still leaves my question unanswered.
    Where am I, and where do I go?
    Exposed, confused, hurt
    But most of all, selfish and unfair.

    It needs to stop. /I/ need to stop.
    I'm doing the one thing I told myself I wouldn't
    Told /him/ I wouldn't.
    I'm being defiant and selfish, in turn causing pain.

    /Wreteched am I/

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