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Author: Toosha
ASL Info:    18/f/SD
Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 20 /13 /11
Words: 66
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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To you, my soul
I hate!
For I used to love
More than my whole being worth

Now, you complicate and strain
And I have tried to reason
Only to find I cannot
Though I keep wasting my life away

Of which holding each other back
I am the one to blame
For there is no reasoning
No, not at a time like this




Submitted on 2009-12-26 13:05:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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