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    dots Submission Name: Weed is good. :] dots
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    Author: Xiallia
    ASL Info:    17-F-Missing Osaka[IL]
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 3/23/32
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 626
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsWeed is good. :] dots
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    Peace, Pot, Tequila shot,
    Jesus loves you, stoned or not.
    Sex, drugs, rock & roll,
    Speed, weed, birth control.
    Lifeís a bitch, then you die,
    So fuck the world, lets get high.
    Weed is a seed that grows in the ground,
    If God didnít want it, it wouldnít be... found.
    So be happy, smoke some pot
    Jesus loves you, stoned or not.
    Stoners live and stoners die,
    but in the end we all get high.
    And if you donít succeed..
    Fuck the world, and buy some weed.





    Submitted on 2009-12-26 20:55:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You write good lyrical verse! But this one is about nothing really, except that feeling you have. Well, I guess there are many imaginitive landscapes and stories to be discovered which could make that feeling into concrete experiences for readers?

    We can state something in plain language only once; but in successive artistic productions, we can say our thing in a thousand different ways.

    Can't say anything else, either!
    | Posted on 2009-12-26 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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