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    dots Submission Name: bumblebees.dots
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    Author: Rhaine
    ASL Info:    25/Yes/An Alley
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 660/744/196
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    little plastic clips,
    the ones that go in my hair,
    laying around the sink.

    dust from my foundation
    caked around the edges on the counter
    i just stare at it.

    toothpaste in the sink,
    toothbrush still buzzing,
    mouthwash laying somewhere on the floor.

    my mind whirling and whirling and twirling,
    then stops.
    music on low, just background noise.

    phone vibrating, its 3:45 am.

    i know i should be sleeping.


    just tell me i'm beautiful.
    just tell me i'm pretty.
    tell me a lie.
    make me feel special.
    let me sleep,
    instead of standing barefoot
    in the bathroom staring at myself
    so early in the morning.


    let me rest.
    let my thoughts slow



    just tell me anything.




    Submitted on 2009-12-27 02:47:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was very nice. It clearly expresses the anxious feeling of wanting your special someone to tell you that your special to them. I know what that's like an felt like that could be applied to me. That's the mark of a good poem when it can not only tell your story but also tell a complete strangers. Good job .

    ~luvy~
    | Posted on 2009-12-27 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]


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