Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Instinctdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Little Gal
    ASL Info:    20 female, Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 469/431/94
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 907
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 245



    Description:
       preferably read in a fast rhythm


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsInstinctdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Ten seconds left
    Not too clear of a shot
    Three to one the innocent by passer will be shot
    No time to think
    The child is dying anyway
    Why save him,
    When could kill someone in the process?
    Instinct.




    Submitted on 2004-07-22 10:37:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      is this has anything to do with isreal... i think that sort of thing happen there...
    why did u write this.. it seemed a bit out of place comming from u..
    but then the work cud have been more abstract.. and more articulate...
    this simply spookes...
    lol
    bye
    | Posted on 2004-07-23 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes, the instinct to survive...something that, unfortunately, too many people have had to develop it even in this modern world.

    Man's only remaining natural predator is man...
    | Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    18149

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    untitled written by Chelebel
    Limbo written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Skulls Beyond the Palisade written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Blood to Plowshares written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    All Time Low written by Janesaddiction
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Born of the Mouth written by MyPeriodical
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Stretto written by saartha
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    The First Time written by Wolfwatching
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Can't let my demons go written by faideddarkness
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    I'm here written by BloodtornAngel
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    Commencement written by Ramneet
    Dirge of Nostalgia written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Watch them Die written by HisNameIsNoMore
    ME written by jjd
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Genesis written by saartha

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry