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    dots Submission Name: Instinctdots
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    Author: Little Gal
    ASL Info:    20 female, Bahrain
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 469/431/94
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       preferably read in a fast rhythm


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    dotsInstinctdots
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    Ten seconds left
    Not too clear of a shot
    Three to one the innocent by passer will be shot
    No time to think
    The child is dying anyway
    Why save him,
    When could kill someone in the process?
    Instinct.




    Submitted on 2004-07-22 10:37:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      is this has anything to do with isreal... i think that sort of thing happen there...
    why did u write this.. it seemed a bit out of place comming from u..
    but then the work cud have been more abstract.. and more articulate...
    this simply spookes...
    lol
    bye
    | Posted on 2004-07-23 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes, the instinct to survive...something that, unfortunately, too many people have had to develop it even in this modern world.

    Man's only remaining natural predator is man...
    | Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]


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