Description: Yeah... the one more chance thing didn't work out and we are no longer together.... I was writing chunks of this as we went through each stage, and you can see the little transitions in it
You're my first thought in the morning
and my last thought at night
You're my midnight darkness
and my morning light
You're the reason for the flutter in my heart
and the shaking in my hands
The reason that I smile
and the reason that I dance.....
This is how I felt for you
before you broke my heart
You filled my soul with passion
and then you ripped me appart....
You fooled me into thinking
that you truely loved me back
Now the only thing I think about
is the feeling that I lack.....
You filled me with promises
that never would come true
Then broke my heart to pieces
when you said that we were through....
Something in me compelled me
to give you one more chance
And I hope to god you'll stay with me
despite our troubled romance....
No matter what the outcome
of one thing I am sure
You're the reason for the beat of my heart
until it beats no more.....
This is written beautfully, Jaymee. And you say I'm the better poet? Hardly. I just write more often. As for the meaning of this poem, you know my opinion and my advice. just keep it in mind, k? LOVE YA GIRL