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Author: joezwells
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to my love


you told me funny stories as laid in a hospital bed
you held my hand and made sure i knew that everything was goingto be okay
you stayed by my side and went without sleep
you kept asking questions to asure everything was fine
you held me all night to make me feel safe
you did more for me in that one day then i ever expected
you are the most amazing person i have ever met
im so in love with you it just keeps getting better
i will be by your side just like you were for me
i will do anything and everything i can to make you as happy as you have made me

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