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    dots Submission Name: What Kind of Family?dots
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    Author: PhantomRose
    ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43/58/35
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotsWhat Kind of Family?dots
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    What kind of father picks favorties?
    What kind of mother leaves?
    What kind of child hates home?
    What kind of girl listens when her daddy calls her fat?
    What kind of family is this?
    MY father is the kind that picks favorites.
    MY mother is the kind that leaves.
    I'M the kind of kid that hates home.
    I'M the girl that listens when my daddy calls her fat.
    THIS is the kind of family that is MINE.




    Submitted on 2009-12-27 23:44:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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