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    dots Submission Name: Landendots

    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       This is a poem for my son!

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    Your the one thing i can count on
    the one thing i know
    the one thing i can enjoy
    the reason i'm alive.

    You are the happyness
    the smiles I show
    the joys that end tho wos
    the soft kiss when i am sad

    You are my world
    my life
    my heart

    Your are everything to me
    and you don't even know
    But when your are bigger
    and you have grown
    I will let you know all
    and how I made it through
    All because of you!

    Submitted on 2009-12-28 14:31:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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