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    dots Submission Name: Together nowdots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 660
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    Description:
       just a lil something I thought of. Hope you all like it


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    dotsTogether nowdots
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    I have these thoughts
    but i don't know what to do
    I have these thoughts
    and they are all about you

    We fit together so perfectly
    yet we are so unalike
    We fit together so perfectly
    and don't see eye to eye

    You are someone i wanted
    and now you are all mine
    You are someone I wanted
    when I was a juvinile

    Now that we are together
    I don't see anyother
    Now that we are together
    I don't see it lasting

    This is what I wanted
    and what you did to
    This is what I wanted
    till I got to know you!




    Submitted on 2009-12-28 14:40:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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