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    dots Submission Name: I must confessdots
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    Author: FranticCrisis
    ASL Info:    17-Male- New Hampshire
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 4/14/16
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 602
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 971



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       I don't have anything to say.


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    dotsI must confessdots
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    I must confess,
    I'm always a mess,
    I have to say
    everything I'm feeling.
    Its inside,
    a place that's died,
    there's nothing left,
    so why am I feeling?

    I touch the pain, and its inside
    it makes us cry,
    so what are these pleas.
    I hear your all words,
    with all this stress,
    they flock like birds,
    are you impressed?
    I want to die.

    You have to say,
    my heart is in play,
    gets hit and cut,
    as it bleeds, flowing.
    The tears and scars,
    stitched up with yarn,
    its breaks within
    we see, are all showing.

    Please help me see
    the pain that hides,
    above my feelings
    the cold dark cloud
    its grown to far.
    My torren heart
    is broken and crossed
    please heal these wounds
    for love I have lost




    Submitted on 2009-12-29 08:43:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      the rhyming feels a little awkward, but the last rhyme is good. i kinda feel the lines are a little too short and fragments the reading flow unnecessarily.
    | Posted on 2009-12-29 00:00:00 | by gotdalife06 | [ Reply to This ]


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