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    Author: jenovah
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/1
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    My senses enlighten me
    to the aura of this world
    and though I am aware
    I do not understand.

    And i am glad.

    I do not wish for the unexplained
    to become explained
    a sense of mystery is required
    to decorate this life
    which becomes ever more monotonous.

    The world can be seen as a note
    it was created
    and will have an end
    as all notes do.

    But a note is not questioned
    it is appreciated
    as should the world.

    Listen to the worlds sound
    as we all hear it differently
    as we ourselves become
    different.

    Incredible is the world
    Incredible is it's sound.




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