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    dots Submission Name: Midnight Moon's Mixologydots
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    Author: all2rest
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 30/40/34
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Just a little writing exercise haha


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    dotsMidnight Moon's Mixologydots
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    Several starlit symphonies
    sang softly, so slowly. Simply
    taking turns to tangle tunes
    that twinkle together tranquilly.
    Music moving momentously,
    mixing moments melodically:
    Midnight moon's mixology




    Submitted on 2009-12-29 21:21:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thanks for the comment on my alliteration homework. I'm glad you enjoyed it. You have a unique aspect making night in this peice come out in more of a melodic kind of melody. So this peice kind of sings to you in a way. Keep writting.

    -J
    | Posted on 2010-05-12 00:00:00 | by cyberpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Alliteration is fun. And these exercises definitely help with writing and with de-stressing, I guess. You've just reminded me to do just that -- de-stress and not take life so seriously right now. Eh.

    Anyway, this was fun to read.
    Ditzy and slightly glitzy, too.

    Yup.
    | Posted on 2010-01-01 00:00:00 | by trinityfinger | [ Reply to This ]
      An interesting little excerise here... I like the flow this peice carries. It seems short, but it hauls a large message. Nice Job!
    D
    | Posted on 2009-12-30 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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