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    dots Submission Name: Why cry ?dots
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    Author: ScrollWriter
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    dotsWhy cry ?dots
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    We Cry

    We Cry

    Oh Why do we cry?

    Time holds us to strings of fate
    Yet all my strings are lose
    Feeling pains Embrace

    We cry why?

    We cry why?

    Why do we cry

    Why do we cry

    Only to release us of the pain that binds us is why is why We Cry




    Submitted on 2009-12-30 19:51:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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