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    dots Submission Name: Just Say Yesdots
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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    dotsJust Say Yesdots
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    You reject my advances,
    Say youíre afraid of taking chances
    I love to show you the world
    As much as I could
    But only if you would
    Just say yes.

    Time and time again
    You say Iím just a friend.
    That my time might be
    Just around the bend

    Iíve explained our potential
    And my sincere intentions
    Just help me love you
    And Iíll give you everything
    A man can give.
    If you just say yes.

    Time and time again,
    You say Iím just a friend
    That my time may be
    Just around the bend

    I want you to know how safety feels
    Wrapped in the arms of love
    You deny my appeals
    To show you how I can truly be
    Iíll bring the truth to my words
    If you just say yes

    Time and time again,
    You say Iím just a friend
    That my time may be
    Just around the bend

    For the time being
    What your eyes have been seeing
    Has been better than the past ones
    But I get no chances
    Not even one
    Itíll all change, youíll see.
    If you just say yes.

    Iíd show you the difference
    Between me, and he
    Iím not that guy youíve had before.
    Iíll give you my world and more.
    But for now
    All you say is no.

    Time and time again
    All I am is a friend
    Thatís all I will be
    Your friend, in the end.





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      "Time and time again
    All I am is a friend
    Thatís all I will be
    Your friend, in the end"

    Thats what I say. to my old flame. my old crush. the one muse I thought I would always have. I love it. I loved it. I love the end. the entire thing was amazingly well-written.
    Rachel:)
    | Posted on 2010-01-13 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]
      I love that line "Time and Time again". All of it had a very clear meaning that the person is in an ever going conflict to be who he/she is.
    Try to find mine like that but ours are both different by a long shot.
    | Posted on 2010-01-01 00:00:00 | by 13thprotector | [ Reply to This ]


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