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    dots Submission Name: sing medots
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    Author: DarknessCalls
    ASL Info:    16/Male/1x1WithMe(:
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 2/5/4
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 523
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 214



    Description:
       :D it's a short love poem, durr>3<


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    dotssing medots
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    sing me a lullaby,
    sing me to sleep,
    sing me soft touches,
    that pull me in deep,
    sing me a love song,
    sing me a kiss,
    sing me your broken heart,
    that i cannot resist




    Submitted on 2009-12-31 04:30:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      great lyrically in meter but if you add more verse would you have to keep up the one two or switch out to a more intricate three skip or a reggae beat you know
    | Posted on 2010-01-10 00:00:00 | by guruleocrates | [ Reply to This ]
      lovely!! It's short but thats what makes it good! I really loved it keep it up!
    | Posted on 2010-01-02 00:00:00 | by cherrywillow | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so sweet but not in a sickly way. I like it very much.
    | Posted on 2009-12-31 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]

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