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    dots Submission Name: Where?dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Spoof/Serious
    Total Views: 528
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 531



    Description:
       I hate/love what we had/have.... so what now?


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    dotsWhere?dots
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    I've been found for you no longer tie me down,
    I'm free to go my seperate ways,
    Ending things were for the best!

    Where to now?
    What direction am I headed,
    For I am lost without you,
    My wings are clipped, I have handicapped myself.

    I have no one to blame but myself for this I allowed,

    I need you
    yet I do not want you
    I am a new person without you,
    But I am also a lost person...

    Where do I go from here??




    Submitted on 2009-12-31 07:06:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Most often, we don't find love, it finds us! And, usually in a most surprising place and at a most unexpected time!

    Breaking off old love affairs is one of the hardest things about love. I hope love finds you, and wraps you up warmly and securely and for forever and always!

    Happy New Years pretty lady!

    | Posted on 2009-12-31 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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