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Submission Name: the hours go by dots

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Author:	stickman
ASL Info:	18 m al
Elite Ratio:	2.64 - 27/44/16
Words:	83

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Love
Total Views:	356
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	510

Description:
true story

the hours go by dots

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hours go by
lovers die
the world is dark
our walks in the park
outside the light
the most beautiful sight
in your eyes
in your eyes
waking up
turning to see your face
walking away
and you beg me to stay
i call in sick
so i can
be with you
the hours go by
the day turns to night
and again here we are
doin' the same thing
day by day
you mean everything

Submitted on 2004-07-22 11:54:46 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  well the best line's already been pointed out.. 'i call in sick..' in such a simple way .. with just one line.. you portray how completely selfless you are in the relationship. and that is the beauty of these lyrics.

i dont know why but i feel that there's an aching sense of longing in your words.. it tugs.. i think it's because of the line 'lover's die'.. like you're not sure it's going to last.. so you want to savour every moment..? maybe i'm reading into it too much.. but i read this a sad love song..

beautifully written.
| Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by girlinthephoto | [ Reply to This ]
  as pat benatar said "love is a battlefield" but it seems your battlefield is more of a sweaty oily "wrestling " ring but why not youre young enjoy it
| Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by aftertheflesh | [ Reply to This ]
  this wasa short song, but i liked it. and if it was a true story, then even better. well enjoy your love. that were some good lyrics.

Zu
| Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by Zu | [ Reply to This ]
  your lyrics sounds very lonely, yet content in a way.
Love is heard, yet when read from toe to head. Hmm, wonder, l do. And continue thinking about some one too. Thanks for sharing!
| Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
  sounds fun to just be with the one you love i wish i was in the situation you are in that would be nice but i'm not so i guess i'll have to live vicariously through you, you don't mind do you? good write
| Posted on 2004-07-22 00:00:00 | by Rennes | [ Reply to This ]

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