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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet - To The New Yeardots
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    Author: gotdalife06
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    dotsSonnet - To The New Yeardots
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    Fire, in the sky, burning velvet and bright
    Loud claps of thunder from the streets aground
    Smoke rising like incense fills the red night
    Repose from the noise, not one to be found
    Fire, the ceaseless raging rain resist
    The humble patter drowned in cracks of doom
    For sheer debauchery, the world exists
    For the year that was not, it should die soon
    Fire, the eminent rainclouds devour
    Fire, the demons in the skies behold
    The clock, it ticks as we count down the hour
    A renewed year of Fate before us unfold
    Welcome another year, you people meet
    Welcome another year of self-defeat




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      I am feeling this one particularly tonight. I destroyed something well over 80 years old tonight, and it is with mixed regret/anger that I think it saw 50 years before my birth, just to fall into my hands and end its existence in the brave year of 2010...
    just 2 years before the mayans ran out of numbers.

    Should I ever figure out how to convert my videos that play only on QuickTime to something compatible with Windows Media Player, I can possibly show you how close you came.
    | Posted on 2010-01-06 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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