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    dots Submission Name: Hush, he ragesdots

    Author: Urisen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Netherlands
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 27/34/32
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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        In the RP section I entertain myself with what is called "the word of the day".

    ( http://www.eliteskills.com/rp/entry/115323 )

    The word of that day was 'diverse'.

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    dotsHush, he ragesdots

    They are too many.
    Trapped inside, awaiting release.
    Pent up, hidden from sight.
    Rage would frighten them, surely, you know this.
    Unsuspected, like your sadness.
    Youíve lost all reason and when askedÖ

    you donít know.

    Youíre lost in the sea that is them.
    Floating, sailing, swimming.
    But nevertheless drowning altogether.
    Itís allÖ

    For they are too many.

    Years pass you by, unnoticed, uncelebrated.
    Hatred, has become common, as is your smile.
    It lasts only for a short while.
    And you dance,

    You dance your dance of death.
    Approaching things unseen, and undesired.
    And when askedÖ

    you donít know.

    For they are too diverse.
    They cannot be measured.
    Or categorized,
    threading the water you sink rapidly.

    Nothing coincides, itís allÖ
    Youíve taken it in your stride, but now,
    now you realize,
    youíre lost.
    Take your loneliness, for example.
    Sometimes, you long for it.
    Mostly, you donít care,
    since no oneís there to see.

    A mirror is but a reflective judge,
    of an exterior we havenít chosen.
    Inside, chaos reigns,
    without fail,
    too many to count,
    your mind but a dam waiting to burst.

    Silence is what you long for.
    Facts of truth, simple answers.
    You cry without reason,
    For you have chained only yourself.

    And when asked;

    You donít know.

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