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    dots Submission Name: Another Fightdots

    Author: faideddarkness
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    6.47 - 99/55/49
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 688
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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       i was bored so i wrote this i was watching sameri movie so you get the idea

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    dotsAnother Fightdots

    The swords clashing
    All across the mountain
    The sun setting
    The sky turning red
    And the moon bleeding
    Into the starry night
    One last breath
    Palms sweating
    Hearts screaming
    Falling into every swing
    Hoping to be the last
    Dyeing to be faster
    Sparks flying
    Flames rising
    Beads of sweat into the eyes
    Visions blurring
    And teeth still grinding
    The body becoming desperate
    Swinging a punch
    Flying a kick
    Into the face
    Into the stomached
    Anything to make stumble
    Becoming out breath
    No energy left
    Stumbling with a pathetic swipe
    Stammering to the knees
    Eyes closing
    Chest pounding
    Laying upon the ground
    Falling to an agreement
    Realizing the match
    And feeling the draw
    Stabbing swords into the ground
    And walking away
    With the intent to return
    Another day
    Another fight

    Submitted on 2010-01-01 01:27:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow I didn't think i was going to like it but its not half bad nice job!

    | Posted on 2010-01-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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