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    dots Submission Name: Pavlov's Dogdots
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    Author: gotdalife06
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 5/11/10
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsPavlov's Dogdots
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    Click, clok, bing, buzz
    You've got mail -
    Where? click, clok, bing -
         The string section sings
              Flashing orange on blue
         Text changing every second like a blink
    Click, clok, tock, bing
    When? How? Where?




    Submitted on 2010-01-01 11:49:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      :) It really IS Pavlovian, isn't it???

    I know I get positively wiggly in my chair if I can't check my email... it's so weak.... what will we do when the lights finally go out???

    It's frightening how dependent society is on it now, isn't it? What will this be known as? The Moronic Conditioning of the Human Psyche? (ie, lost people wandering around, with no GPS voices to guide them... scary!)

    Great comparison...
    | Posted on 2010-01-19 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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