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    dots Submission Name: YOU!!!dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 422
    Class/Type: Rant/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 388
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    Bytes: 2429



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       To my manager at work... I just don't understand and its pretty clear she dose not know or understand...


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    dotsYOU!!!dots
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    Do me a favor please!
    Stick your humor, your games where I'd rather NOT put things!
    I have been hired into your company for a reason,
    I was considered an employee on August 28th for some FUCKING REASON
    If you don't like it,
    If you dislike me to that great extent PLEASE
    do us all a favor and DO SOMETHING about it!!
    Oh but NoPe can't do that can we?
    Let me take a few guesses on why the fuck that maybe!

    I've busted my ass always doing as told,
    coming in to begin my 3rd shift, arriving on time,
    Never finding an excuse to not show!
    I'm not like the others for I have a worth ethic,
    Maybe this is why!
    Why you despise me,
    you see possibility in me, you see a difference in me...

    Why break it down?
    Why put me down for it?

    You always mention how you don't see why I think I have to work so much,
    You say I must be a hateful person to listen to the kind of music I do
    You tell me you feel none of your employees know what real work is!!!

    With this I bit down on my lip and turn away for... "YOU" HAVE NO IDEA WHAT REAL WORK IS!!

    Granted my past is exactly this "The, My Past" Nevertheless it has shaped and formed me to who I am today.
    I have what I consider a great work ethic thanks to my sexually abusive Step Father,
    I take any and every job I have seriously and extremely enthuisiatic
    I listen to my mostly alternative hard rock music because it is what puts me as ease,
    When people like you get to me!

    Last but certainly not least!!!
    You may be my superior you may be the one who takes into consideration when and if I get a raise,
    This dose not bother me!
    For you are so little to me,
    a person so weak to put me down
    a person too weak to acknowledge my positive differences between now and when hired.

    I'd like to see you begin working all to get away from your sexually abusive Step Father
    I'd like to see your ass still GO TO FUCKING WORK after he fingers you!!!

    More than this I'd like to your ass go and begin working after an attempted suicied with a 12 gauge shotgun
    I'd like to see you constantly be in pain yet always show up!!!!




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      Heres to that last comment on here.This obviously a reflection and a rant to satisfy self being after an occurrance.This has something to do with the coping mechanism that writing is.This is'nt a crappy site.The whole 12gauge thing I'm not disturbed by.Nothing actually.How can one say this is'nt worth posting on here when idiots put stupid unnecessary things on Youtube or whereever else.I can understand if you have friends but no close ones.You have my standing ovation and applause because THEY do not see.That you have overcome many things since this is so profound.I believe the message is:Nothing is ever easy.Working day after day fingers to the bone and still stand and say 'I'M PROUD OF MYSELF AFTER ALL THAT I'VE BEEN THROUGH AND THOSE THAT DON'T NOTICE MY WORK ETHIC CAN NEVER TAKE IT AWAY FROM ME.The last person who commented, they commented and did'nt decipher enough.Writers that understand death are the most powerful Why? Simply because with that type of writer there is always questions RIGHT NOW CAN I PAINT WHAT I KNOW OR CAN I PAINT WHAT I FEEL.That's for the whole shotgun thing.Theres more than one way to interpret this another reason it's powerful.but it can trick you to thinking of sympathy for the author instead of close attention to the work.I give it to u all the way Jackz.Something tells me this means more to you than a rant though.
    | Posted on 2010-07-08 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen sister. Nobody appreciates dedication and strong work ethic, especially if its some a-hole with seniority over you. I was a manager at a restaurant, when I got the promotion everyone thought I'd still look the other way while the boinked around like mentally challenged children until I fired the head chef for sexually harassing a customer (man that felt good). Ranting is a good tool for flushing all the negative energy out, and try to channel more of the anger out on paper than on yourself. No need to go hurting yourself as much as everyone else hurts you.
    | Posted on 2010-06-16 00:00:00 | by JR Hoodlum | [ Reply to This ]
      um. that was a shock.
    and Raphael is right, you should talk to someone in real life, ranting here is not gonna change much.
    But, build you charecter the way you feel u should. If you feel that ranting out what you feel would make you stronger, then so be it. do that, and talking to someone wouldnt hurt. Get help.
    | Posted on 2010-01-16 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]
      Are you serious? I mean, did these things really happen to you. If so, don't you think this deserves more time than a rant on some online writing site. !2 gauge shotgun...like, it's hard for me to even beleive that because I don't know you and lets say you get all these replies saying: "oh sweatie, I'm so sorry to hear about all the pain your going through" etc etc, so what? They don't know you either. What I'm trying to say is that a rant like this, if everything is to be taken literally then this isn't the place for it. A councillor or close friend or something, but you shouldn't have to vent out this stuff on a crappy site, no one here deserves to know, it's people in the real world you should be telling like your manager for instance. Tell them to piss off in person. I have nothing to say to ranting, it's like your letting me in on stuff I shouldn't know and can be taken out of context. You say in one line she is so small and cannot bother you and yet you are so clearly bothered. You say you are an efficient worker because you were sexually abused. Unless your being ironic then that's a worrying thing to say. All in all I'm kind of distrurbed.
    | Posted on 2010-01-01 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]


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