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Author: ModestyB
Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 64 /38 /31
Words: 79
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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The sun shines, I prefer the rain
It hides the tears, but not the pain
Since you’ve been gone, the days are so lonely
The nights I can get through, only
By hugging brown bear
Imagining you’re there
With me in our bed
Of being in your grave
From which you, I could not save
The sun still shines
And I, still cry.

Submitted on 2010-01-01 15:45:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It was like you was in my head, lived lost NowWhat! Thank you for your words.... I feel less AlOnE.
| Posted on 2010-01-09 00:00:00 | by CryBaby | [ Reply to This ]
  The RAin is the only place I can still feel his touch!
| Posted on 2010-01-09 00:00:00 | by CryBaby | [ Reply to This ]

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