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    dots Submission Name: Raindots
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    Author: ModestyB
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 64/38/31
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsRaindots
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    The sun shines, I prefer the rain
    It hides the tears, but not the pain
    Since you’ve been gone, the days are so lonely
    The nights I can get through, only
    By hugging brown bear
    Imagining you’re there
    With me in our bed
    Instead
    Of being in your grave
    From which you, I could not save
    The sun still shines
    And I, still cry.





    Submitted on 2010-01-01 15:45:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It was like you was in my head, lived lost NowWhat! Thank you for your words.... I feel less AlOnE.
    | Posted on 2010-01-09 00:00:00 | by CryBaby | [ Reply to This ]
      The RAin is the only place I can still feel his touch!
    | Posted on 2010-01-09 00:00:00 | by CryBaby | [ Reply to This ]


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