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Loves Loser

Author: ModestyB
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Loves Loser

When love is lost what happens next
to those with broken hearts
when all hope is gone
and sadness comes
where do people look
for comfort and for warmth
do they wish for another love
or give up altogether

When happiness goes astray
and life seems not worth living
will anger take the place
of kindness
and goodwill
will they tell themselves lies
of other people’s sins
never admitting their own

Too scared to trust in others
to seek the truths of life
fear is all pervading
fear of failure is rife
to put their life in hands
that take and then destroy
all hope

If they look for consolation in harmony
of soul with nature they’ll find
hidden beauties revealed
If they look for the rainbow
instead of the rain
love that is true will find them
and fortune will smile once again

Submitted on 2010-01-01 15:54:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like every thing about this poem the words the way its set up all around good write!
| Posted on 2010-01-04 00:00:00 | by BlackBloodDrop | [ Reply to This ]

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