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    dots Submission Name: It's Still Patheticdots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Itís Still Pathetic



    Moving closer up the sofa, as you do, he recoils
    Make your move, and try and take the spoils
    I have no sympathy, when he jumps up to make a tea
    You have a kiss as rough as sandpaper, a touch like a rock
    Its just because you can hear your biological clock
    It doesnít sound like it used to do, wonderful thing is age
    As he returns from the kitchen, he returns to your drama, your stage
    You would give anything to be under those hips
    And to stroke his tongue with your lips
    But all of the beauty you tried to muster
    Still leave you looking lacklustre

    Its still pathetic
    And he knows, I think he knows


    She brought a new dress and combed her hair
    But she got not one advance, not even a stare
    Your persistence is to be admired, you never get bored
    Even if you do get persistently ignored
    As he stands and walks away
    It must be hard to admit youíve lost it all
    Its so hard to tell when youíre going to fall
    Yet you tell yourself, its gonna happen someday
    Its not his fault he doesnít feel the same
    He doesnít even know your name


    Whatís your name? Whatís your name?




    Submitted on 2010-01-01 19:56:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting... I find myself thinking about what you were thinking about while writing this. Well honestly it seems pretty simple, but I wonder what happened for you to write something like this. Its quiet good...lots of great imagery.
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    | Posted on 2010-01-02 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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